W.I.P. - First Kill

I like this doodle so much it decided to become my first ever WIP submition. XP
Came out awfully neat... the pic was pretty much done in about half hour.
Still trying to fix flaws, obviously. ^_~

I wonder who can this be???
Only hint that the original design is owned by *Lylac.
Maybe that pretty much gave it away.. yeah. XD
This is the 1st of the two that I owe her. Sorry I take so long... I can't draw, that everyone seems to disagree upon.

Tan (c) *Lylac
Drawing (c) ~n3ko